GUCCI? NOT GUCCI!

In our last blog post, we specified that we wanted GUCCI level work. We know what Gucci means, right? The work we got in your blogs was strictly Canal Street. Typos, vague ideas, misspellings, no structure, random capital letters, two sentences masquerading as a post. If you actually completed a blog post yesterday, we have read and commented on it.

So, you need to rewrite your work. If you're not sure HOW to structure your writing, see beolw (or Frances). If you're struggling with your ideas, or are having trouble with your computer, see Chris.

Once you have made your point (your statement that Jenifer is either a predator or a parasite), you must back it up with evidence. Use specific examples from the text and visuals of the story.  It is not enough to simply provide examples that show Jenifer is a predator, clearly explain how each example (remember, visual and textual) shows that she is a predator.  For example:

Parasites characteristically ______________.  We see Jenifer act as a parasite when she ____________. Furthermore, she _____________________. Jenifer also __________________. (Note that there should be several detailed examples of how Jenifer is a predator or parasite.) The artist emphasizes her parasitic nature through using _______________.  (You should have at least one or two references to the visual aspect of the piece.)  Clearly, ________________________.

We expect to see evidence of revision. That means, copy and paste your original blog post under the first copy. Do all your revisions to the bottom post so that the differences between the first and second can be compared.

To create the second piece of text: 
Highlight text,
control C
enter
control V
All revisions should be on the bottom piece of text. Leave the top the same.



http://www.besthorrorcomics.com/pdf/Jenifer.pdf